Tuesday, 24 May 2011

I have breath
for your wings
and a mind full of sky
so don't tell me
it's too late for love

9 comments:

lissa said...

love these words ...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Lissa, I'm touched by your words...

Devika said...

for the kind of love that sets the soul free to soar like that ...it is never late...should never be late - or rather, better late than never....for anyone and everyone,

beautiful poem, Paul...it envisions and expresses my idea of love in the most articulate way -- so, needless to say, I loved it,

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Devika, I am touched by the depth of your reading...

Brian said...

Full of plaintive hope and longing. A beautiful poem.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Brian, as ever your comments inspire me to 'write on'.

janetd said...

can really feel the life in your words here.

glad to see you've kept up your blog. wonderful writing.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Janet.

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