Wednesday, 31 August 2011

I imagine you leaving...
a blossom in the breeze
silent
weightless
free

red lights V7 N2 June 2011

7 comments:

Brian said...

If only we could permit all departures this grace and regard.

Your touch grows lighter and more transparent, Paul.

nance marie said...

and with your return
you scatter fall leaves
grateful
i fall to my knees

Dave Serjeant said...

...and vulnerable.

Nice one Paul

gotrabhu said...

a tender song of fragility...!
Renée

Frank... said...

An evocative poem, Paul. A lot to thinks about...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your kind comments and responses to this one. it's special to me...

Rita Odeh said...

parting..
that hazy sun behind
the barbed wire

Exceptionally stunning.Your poems flow as silent, weightless and free as the river's water in its way to the the reader's sea.

~Rita