Monday, 12 September 2011

that innocent glint
in your eyes
reminds me what I lost
so long ago
too soon

Modern English Tanka V2 No3 Spring 2008

9 comments:

ThoseThr3Words-Claire said...

Beautiful, Paul. I think many of us can relate to this one. Thank you for posting it...

Claire

Frank... said...

Very nice, Paul. I too think many of us can relate to this one...

Brian said...

I agree with Claire & Frank, Paul. I think many readers will see themselves in this mirror you hold-up.

John McDonald said...

love it Paul
john

Dave Serjeant said...

very poignant, Paul.

gotrabhu said...

touching...
Renée

Kristin Riggs said...

Sad and beautiful. Very nice!

juca2 said...

A beautifully-crafted tanka Paul. // Peter.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all so much...

Welcome to Paper Moon Peter...