Thursday, 29 September 2011

singing the song
of forever
ten billion suns
appeared
like daisies

6 comments:

Brian said...

A perfect tanka in every way, Paul.

Kristin Riggs said...

What imagery!!! Love it.

John McDonald said...

lovely stuff here Paul as usual
john

Frank... said...

A very visual tanka, Paul...

gotrabhu said...

the song of the beautiful light...
Renée

Paul Smith said...

Thank you All for your kind comments. I hope all is well with you...