Paper Moon

Sunday, 13 May 2012

drifting silently
downstream
the sky
I will one day
become

Blithe Spirit V22 N1 March 2012

Brian said...: Beautiful, Paul. I always think it ingratitude and ego to wish for anything more.; 13 May 2012 at 16:21
Frank... said...: Man and nature as one. Very nice tanka, Paul...; 13 May 2012 at 18:34
Gillena Cox said...: a good place of returning :)

much love...; 17 May 2012 at 11:45
Anonymous said...: beautiful; 31 May 2012 at 13:57
Dave Serjeant said...: excellent tanka, Paul; 8 June 2012 at 00:40
Paul Smith said...: Thank you for your kind comments.; 13 June 2012 at 14:00
Area 17 said...: Beautiful.

Alan; 19 July 2012 at 23:59
mattm said...: I'm a bit late on this one Paul, but the other comments sum up my thoughts pretty well, good stuff, Matt; 24 August 2012 at 16:46