Sunday 13 May 2012

drifting silently
downstream
the sky
I will one day
become

Blithe Spirit V22 N1 March 2012

8 comments:

Brian said...

Beautiful, Paul. I always think it ingratitude and ego to wish for anything more.

Frank... said...

Man and nature as one. Very nice tanka, Paul...

Gillena Cox said...

a good place of returning :)

much love...

Anonymous said...

beautiful

Dave Serjeant said...

excellent tanka, Paul

Paul Smith said...

Thank you for your kind comments.

Area 17 said...

Beautiful.

Alan

mattm said...

I'm a bit late on this one Paul, but the other comments sum up my thoughts pretty well, good stuff, Matt