Paper Moon

Monday, 11 May 2009

blue dusk -
the egret's shadow
long gone

Frank... said...: "Blue dusk" and "shadow long gone", I sense that this haiku is about regret. Nicely worded haiku Paul...; 11 May 2009 at 23:27
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Frank.; 14 May 2009 at 10:33
Area 17 said...: Perfect haiku.

all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition.; 18 May 2009 at 23:46
Beryl Singleton Bissell said...: Lovely, silent image.; 26 May 2009 at 16:20
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Beryl.; 26 May 2009 at 20:03