Tanka and other short form poetry
Very nice poem, Paul :)wishes,devikaMy wishes to Karen too, knowing she is your wife :)
A beautiful series of moments captured in a sensitive manner Paul...
in youth our wanting takes us away from ourselves ... with age we return home.beautifully inspiredbeautifully feltbeautifully livedbeautifully written
Thank you Devika, Frank & Laure for your comments.Laure I agree completely that with age we experience a kind of home-coming after a journey we were perhaps never fully aware that we had undertaken.
yes great series Pauljohn
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Very nice poem, Paul :)
wishes,
devika
My wishes to Karen too, knowing she is your wife :)
A beautiful series of moments captured in a sensitive manner Paul...
in youth our wanting takes us away from ourselves ... with age we return home.
beautifully inspired
beautifully felt
beautifully lived
beautifully written
Thank you Devika, Frank & Laure for your comments.
Laure I agree completely that with age we experience a kind of home-coming after a journey we were perhaps never fully aware that we had undertaken.
yes great series Paul
john
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