Paper Moon

Tuesday, 18 August 2009

your every movement
is like breath to me
a gentle breeze
heading out
across the sea

for Karen on her birthday

Frank... said...: A very evocative tanka Paul...; 18 August 2009 at 13:02
Laurie A. said...: this love honors life.

may Karen wear it as a shawl ...; 18 August 2009 at 16:33
Devika Jyothi said...: Very lovely verse as a birthday gift, Paul :)

Happy b'day to Karen...don't know who she is though :)

wishes,
devika; 18 August 2009 at 18:09
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Frank, Laure & Devika.

Laure, both Karen and I think the image of a shawl is beautiful, thank you.

Devika, (sorry I should have made it clear) Karen is my wife. Thanks again for your comments.; 18 August 2009 at 19:07