Saturday, 3 October 2009

late summer -
on this day of glimmering sea
and sky
I've become
the wind's song

Modern English Tanka V3 No4 Summer 2009

10 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Very nice, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

mattm said...

Good stuff Paul, Matt

Paul Smith said...

Devika, Matt, thank you for your comments.

Laurie A. said...

such sound

such movement

such freedom

Kristin Riggs said...

ahhh...lovely melody. :)

Paul Smith said...

Hi Laure, Kirstin thank you for this.

to lose yourself
for just a moment
is forever

Paul Smith said...

Of course I meant Kristin!

Kristin Riggs said...

I know, Paul! I also sometimes think faster than I type. :)
I read this again and enjoyed it just as much the second time...
You should read the one I just posted...here you spoke of the wind's song and tonight I spoke of the night's song. Nature is full of beautiful music. :)

John McDonald said...

well done Paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Cheers John.