Tanka and other short form poetry
Nice poem, Paul, :)We are often capable of only creating holes in the sky with our blank stares (the blankness ofcourse would have some reason whatsoever)....& its the butterfly, which comes from somewhere and going somewhere, that either brings us back to reality or take us to some fanatasy world, :)wishes, devika
**fantasy world -- typo
Very nice!I so enjoyed this!Margie:)
Hi Devika, Margie, thank you so much for your comments.Butterflies have been a constant source of inspiration for me of late, they seem to embody so much that is beautiful within this fleeting world.
Beautiful, Paul...I think I'd follow that butterfly! :)
Thank you Kristin, I follow it as often as possible!
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Nice poem, Paul, :)
We are often capable of only creating holes in the sky with our blank stares (the blankness ofcourse would have some reason whatsoever)....
& its the butterfly, which comes from somewhere and going somewhere, that either brings us back to reality or take us to some fanatasy world, :)
wishes,
devika
**fantasy world -- typo
Very nice!
I so enjoyed this!
Margie:)
Hi Devika, Margie, thank you so much for your comments.
Butterflies have been a constant source of inspiration for me of late, they seem to embody so much that is beautiful within this fleeting world.
Beautiful, Paul...I think I'd follow that butterfly! :)
Thank you Kristin, I follow it as often as possible!
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