Tanka and other short form poetry
A nice combination of colours Paul. I've never seen a Redwing.
Thanks I enjoyed your work. It came on the perfect day for it. Which for Ga. USA isn't that often. :)
Colour in snow -- very nice, Paul :)wishes, devika
Oh there's more to it with "almost dusk" -- very nice imagery, Paul....perhaps i didn't realise before :)wishes, devika
Thanks Devika. It was a beautiful sight. It is the first time I have seen redwings in our garden and somehow the snow added that little extra!
Paul: I agree with Devika, colours in snow can be beautiful. Nice haiku...
yes a delightjohn
Cheers John.
Excellent haiku, Paul. Nice way to evoke the colours of sunset
Thanks Dave, It's always good to have your views.
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A nice combination of colours Paul. I've never seen a Redwing.
Thanks I enjoyed your work. It came on the perfect day for it. Which for Ga. USA isn't that often. :)
Colour in snow -- very nice, Paul :)
wishes,
devika
Oh there's more to it with "almost dusk" -- very nice imagery, Paul....perhaps i didn't realise before :)
wishes,
devika
Thanks Devika. It was a beautiful sight. It is the first time I have seen redwings in our garden and somehow the snow added that little extra!
Paul: I agree with Devika, colours in snow can be beautiful. Nice haiku...
yes a delight
john
Cheers John.
Excellent haiku, Paul. Nice way to evoke the colours of sunset
Thanks Dave, It's always good to have your views.
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