Tanka and other short form poetry
A beautiful haiku Paul - love it...
This is lovely, Paul. Hope you are doing well.
Hi Paul - nice haiku.
Hi Frank, Kristin, Dave, thanks for the comments. I'm on a go slow at the moment with a very painful back. Hey ho!!!
Hi Paul: Sorrry to hear about your back;I hope that you feel better soon.Best, Frank...
backs! Apparently I still have rock hard muscles around lumbar No 4 after doing my back in eight years ago. Hasn't given me any jip since, though.Congratulations on your Presence spot, by the way.
Beautiful haiku, Paul :)So less poems from you -- hope all is well, wishes, devika
Oh i just read the comments....Hope you feel better soon, :)wishes, devika
Thank you all for your comments / kind wishes. Glad you enjoyed the Presence spot Dave, I thought it came across quite well. (But what do I know???)
excellent sets Pauljohn
Thanks John.
I really don't know what it is about your poetry, and I will never wish to disconstruct your poems too far: but they are almost always unfailingly breathtaking.Alan With Words.
Thanks Alan. The renga party in Bath sounds fun!
I know you'd make a great contribution to the renga session.all my best,AlanAlan’s Area 17 blog.
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A beautiful haiku Paul - love it...
This is lovely, Paul. Hope you are doing well.
Hi Paul - nice haiku.
Hi Frank, Kristin, Dave, thanks for the comments. I'm on a go slow at the moment with a very painful back. Hey ho!!!
Hi Paul:
Sorrry to hear about your back;I hope that you feel better soon.
Best, Frank...
backs! Apparently I still have rock hard muscles around lumbar No 4 after doing my back in eight years ago. Hasn't given me any jip since, though.
Congratulations on your Presence spot, by the way.
Beautiful haiku, Paul :)
So less poems from you -- hope all is well,
wishes,
devika
Oh i just read the comments....Hope you feel better soon, :)
wishes,
devika
Thank you all for your comments / kind wishes.
Glad you enjoyed the Presence spot Dave, I thought it came across quite well. (But what do I know???)
excellent sets Paul
john
Thanks John.
I really don't know what it is about your poetry, and I will never wish to disconstruct your poems too far: but they are almost always unfailingly breathtaking.
Alan
With Words
.
Thanks Alan. The renga party in Bath sounds fun!
I know you'd make a great contribution to the renga session.
all my best,
Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
.
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