Monday, 11 May 2009

blue dusk -
the egret's shadow
long gone

5 comments:

Frank Williams said...

"Blue dusk" and "shadow long gone", I sense that this haiku is about regret. Nicely worded haiku Paul...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank.

Alan Summers said...

Perfect haiku.

all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition.

Beryl Singleton Bissell said...

Lovely, silent image.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Beryl.