Tanka and other short form poetry
Paul: This is a lovely haiku with a genuine surreal feel to it. I have had a look at the Ambrosia web page. In particular, I like the snowman haiku. I wrote something similar a while ago, and it was used as the hokku to a renku called “Sudden Thaw”. sudden thaw...and the snowman's eyesturn back to stonesAll the best, Frank...
good one Paul congrats on ambrosiajohn
Thank you both for your comments. Frank, I really like the ku.
I enjoyed all your haiku in Ambrosia particulary the early blossoms haiku.My favourite is the one you posted on this blog.Frank's hokku is wonderful too, a series on snowman haiku, or at least a section in a Christmas special, seems a possibility, with poems of this quality.all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.
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