Sunday, 11 April 2010

as if tomorrow
had yet to find us
we make love
beneath the stars
one last time

Gusts No.11 Spring/Summer 2010

8 comments:

Frank Williams said...

A very amospheric/emotional tanka, Paul...

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Frank, I'm glad it spoke.

Kristin Riggs said...

Tender, evocative...beautiful. Love it, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Kristin, thank you for your comment as ever very much appreciated.

Sam said...

I really love the feeling of this poem, it really resonates.

Cindybrown said...

That is beautiful!!! Love it!

chico said...

This poem got me sigh all night long. Living as if today is the last day is the essence of romance, I believe.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Sam, Cindy and Chico, thank you all for your encouraging comments and WELCOME to Paper Moon.