Wednesday, 21 April 2010

butterfly -
the shape it left
in evening sky
I feel it again
& again...

Gusts No.11 Spring/Summer 2010

4 comments:

Frank Williams said...

This is a lovely tanka, Paul. To feel a shape is a wonderful way of putting it...

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Frank. I really like this myself and was pleased that it was selected for 'Gusts'.

Cindybrown said...

That is so PRETTY!!

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Cindy, it's always a joy to hear that a poem has spoken.