Friday, 10 September 2010

the art of feelings
is a mystery
lines drawn
in sand
over and over again

6 comments:

Devika said...

Great expression, Paul :)

in a worldly world, feelings keep changing...we think we are changing, but when the fleeting feeling goes, we are still the same....yet, we can't jump into the same river twice -- just my thoughts as i read it :)

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

"the art of feelings" -- that is what we are trying to capture as artists and poets --but so evasive it is sometimes :)

wishes,
devika

S said...

washed by
tides again

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Devika your words are always appreciated.

S, lovely to see you here, I hope you enjoy Paper Moon.

I love your words below

washed by
tides again
memories
memories
memories

Frank said...

An exellent poem, with real depth of emotion, Paul...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank, your encouragement is a gift my friend.