Tuesday, 14 September 2010

I see it glisten
in her eyes
from time to time
that place
where time has no meaning

Atlas Poetica No 6 Summer 2010

9 comments:

Dave Serjeant said...

Excellent stuff Paul!

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Dave!

S said...

where meaning won't expire

Paul Smith said...

Thank you S. I love the way you offer a few words by way of comment. Thank you so much.

to that place
'where meaning
won't expire'
she drifts silently
like a paper swan

Frank said...

You have a great way of conveying emotion, Paul. I like this a lot...

S said...

borrowed your swan
and made her drown

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank. It means so much coming from you.

S, I have just seen your own 'paper swan' on your blog. Thank you.

I said...

It's really hard to choose a favorite! Luckily we can have many!

Paul Smith said...

I, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm sorry it has taken a while to respond.