Sunday, 16 January 2011

a dot-to-dot
written across time
only now
do I see my life
for what it is

red lights V7 N1 January 2011

5 comments:

bazza said...

Regrettably, Paul, in life we can only hope to join those dots retrospectively!
Bazza’s Blog ‘To Discover Ice’

Paul Smith said...

So true Bazza. Thanks for dropping by.

Devika said...

Yes, have to agree with Bazza, but it surely depends on what we are here for...no?

a thoughtful poem, Paul...said so much in five lines,

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

A nice tanka,Paul. A lot to think about in this one...

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Frank (good to see you again) thank you for the comments.

I suppose if we could see the whole of our life from an early age it would be pretty terrifying!