Thursday, 6 January 2011

there's no pretence
out here
where the river
runs dark...
everything just is


Devika said...

dark river's soul
a swan-song

I wrote that because the tanka said about where we are, where we have to be...And i liked it a lot, Paul...and wish you a Happy New and Inspired 2011 :)


Paul Smith said...

Hey Devika, thank you so much. Your words are beautiful and your presence as always much appreciated.

Kenia Cris said...

It may be a peaceful place to be in, where you don't have to worry about being appropriate or not.

Beautiful words. =)

Take care and keep smiling.

Paul Smith said...

Kenia, so good to see you here, thank you for dropping by...