Wednesday, 26 January 2011

winter dawn -
this day's sad song
is a gull
crying out above
a shrinking world

5 comments:

Devika said...

Good poem, as always, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

Brian said...

The gull's lamentation is eloquent and sobering. Nicely done, Paul.

Frank said...

A very poignant poem, Paul - I like it a lot...

Kristin Riggs said...

There is a haunting quality to this poem. Beautiful and sad. I see so many shades of grey in my mind when I read it. So good!

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Brian, Frank, Kristen, thank you for dropping by. It is good to hear how this poem has spoken to you.