Tanka and other short form poetry
Oh you said it well, Paul....i've gone through this so many times :)wishes, devika
well done Pauljohn
Hi Devika, John, Margie, thank you for dropping by and leaving your comments.
Oh wow...it's like having my feet knocked out from under me, Paul...The beginning is a happy sigh and then suddenly...heartbreak! So beautifully done. Love it.
Hi Kristin, thank you so much for the feedback, I am really touched.
Paul - wow - this poem is amazing. Just amazing. Excellently composed. An amazing economy of words (particularly on the last line). Just all round WOW WOW.Keep up the GREAT work.
Thanks Dick, you are as ever a great source of encouragement.
Dave, thank you, I am touched by your generosity.
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