Sunday, 27 March 2011

invisible
to those around me
I watch blossoms
fall
a thousand years from now

8 comments:

Brian said...

To rest and watch unseen a thousand years...To me an image of bliss and a beautiful poem.

Frank... said...

A poem of vision, Paul. Wonderful...

Looking for Siddhartha said...

very beautiful poems. Nice to discover your blog!

All the best wishes!

Renée

John McDonald said...

yes wonderful indeed
john

Dave Serjeant said...

Another cracking poem. Loved it's surreal qualities and recognise the feeling of stepping out of time and becoming absorbed by the moment.

Devika said...

Yes, others have said it...a visionary poem with a surreal feel -- very nice, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

Pranavam Ravikumar a.k.a. Kochuravi said...

gooD!

Paul Smith said...

Thanks all. I really appreciate your comments.

It's good to see new faces here too, welcome to Paper Moon.