Paper Moon

Monday, 7 March 2011

these blossoms
have so much to teach...
inside
outside
gone

Brian said...: That last line suggests an oxymoron to me: "tender sucker-punch". I am deeply moved by this, Paul.; 8 March 2011 at 03:07
Frank... said...: A lovely poem, Paul...; 11 March 2011 at 10:23
Anonymous said...: open
furl
crinkle
shrink
curl; 14 March 2011 at 02:14
Devika Jyothi said...: Nice poem Paul...Nance Marie brings a smile :)

wishes,
devika; 15 March 2011 at 07:14
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Brian, Frank, Nance, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you.

Nance, your response is beautiful, thank you and welcome to Paper Moon.; 15 March 2011 at 11:27