Monday, 7 March 2011

these blossoms
have so much to teach...
inside
outside
gone

5 comments:

Brian said...

That last line suggests an oxymoron to me: "tender sucker-punch". I am deeply moved by this, Paul.

Frank... said...

A lovely poem, Paul...

nance marie said...

open
furl
crinkle
shrink
curl

Devika said...

Nice poem Paul...Nance Marie brings a smile :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Brian, Frank, Nance, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you.

Nance, your response is beautiful, thank you and welcome to Paper Moon.