Tuesday, 15 March 2011

the poetry
of this quiet place
is a broken reed
gently twisting
the breeze

7 comments:

Devika said...

So beautifully said, Paul,

wishes,
devika

Frank... said...

Beautifully written, Paul. I like this a lot...

Brian said...

Incredible delicacy, Paul.

John McDonald said...

delightful Paul
john

Kristin Riggs said...

Hello, Paul! I've been absent over the past month or so (our family grew and left little time for blogging!), so I had to play catch-up. Your last several have been brilliant...very touching!!! You're a master...that's all I have to say! :)

Sincerely,
Kristin

Dave Serjeant said...

Love this Paul.

Twisting the breeze - excellent.

As ever I remain quietly envious of your tanka writing abilities.

Paul Smith said...

Thank all for your kind comments.

Congratulations Kristin on the new arrival. A real blessing to you all.

Dave, I'm humbled by your words... Your own work has been an inspiration to me for some time now. A deep bow to you...