Tanka and other short form poetry
i like this Paul, the word 'surprise' brings an element of life/joy :)wishes, devika
really wonderful, Paul.'surprise' adds great movement to this verse.
Thank you Devika and Laure. This poem reminds me of the wealth that we have all around us at any given moment if only we are tuned in to it.
yes! and you are ... tuned in.
Thank you Laure, the feeling is mutual.
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i like this Paul,
the word 'surprise' brings an element of life/joy :)
wishes,
devika
really wonderful, Paul.
'surprise' adds great movement to this verse.
Thank you Devika and Laure. This poem reminds me of the wealth that we have all around us at any given moment if only we are tuned in to it.
yes! and you are ... tuned in.
Thank you Laure, the feeling is mutual.
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