Thursday, 1 July 2010

her words
have painted a meadow
in me
where countless flowers
bloom

inspired by Claire

9 comments:

Amy said...

that is beautiful! :)

Devika said...

Its beautiful, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

brilliant
john

Nicole Hyde said...

That sings! Lovely poem, Paul.

Kristin Riggs said...

Oh my, Paul! This is absolutely beautiful. You have such a gift. Thanks for sharing.

bazza said...

Hi Paul. I found this blog by random chance using the 'next blog' button.
I think writing good short pieces must be very difficult and your work, for me, stands out in this genre.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Amy, Devika, John, Nicole, Kristin & Bazza. Thank you all for your kind comments.

Bazza, welcome, i am touched by your words, thank you.

Liam Wilkinson said...

Absolutely brilliant - I love the rhythm of it.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Liam, it means a lot.