Saturday, 24 July 2010

colour the breeze
at the meadow's edge
as we walk
into our dream

Lyrical Passion Poetry E-Zine


Frank said...

This is a very colourful haiku, Paul. I can smell the breeze

Devika said...

Beautiful poem, Paul :)


joanne said...

i've just discovered your lovely place here and am so happy to have done so... and especially to have landed on this post first thing. How I love the sunflower.

John McDonald said...

lovely stuff Paul

Paul Smith said...

Hi Frank, Devika, Joanne & John, thank you for your comments.

Joanne I'm glad that you stumbled upon Paper Moon and hope you will return.

Kristin Riggs said...

Whimsical, Paul. I really enjoyed this one!

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Kristin & congratulations (again) on your wonderful news.