Friday, 9 July 2010

I feel the weight of me
more and more
as swallows
weave their signature
through sky

10 comments:

Devika said...

i can relate with this one,

good poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

A beautifully woven poem, Paul...

Kristin Riggs said...

Sigh...just gorgeous, Paul. :)

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Frank (good to have you back!) and Kristin, the grace of swallows in flight never ceases to move me. I'm glad this one worked for you.

John McDonald said...

deeelightful! stuff Paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Cheers John.

Liam Wilkinson said...

Really love this, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Liam, you are most kind.

Dianne said...

the swallows send a thrill through our weighted souls! Excellent.
present and attentive
Dianne

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Dianne, I'm pleased this one spoke so widely.