Monday, 21 September 2009

autumn equinox -
I leave the dandelion clock
wishing for nothing

5 comments:

Frank Williams said...

A very evocative moment Paul. Its simplicity is what haiku is all about. One could fill a world of sensations from all the senses around this moment...

Kristin Riggs said...

This is wonderful...a great deal is captured in this moment. Thank you so much for visiting my blog and for you kind comment. I enjoyed reading through your work...very nice!!!

Kristin Riggs said...

for "your" kind comment...I often type faster than I think! :)

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank & Kristin for your kind comments.

Alan Summers said...

Another fine haiku. Looking forward to a collection coming out this or next year. ;-)

all my best,
Alan
With Words
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