Thursday, 24 September 2009

like the ocean
there are depths
in my heart
that will remain
forever unknown

Modern English Tanka V3 No3 Spring 2009

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

another goodie paul
john

Kristin Riggs said...

This is fantastic. I wrote one with a very similar theme a couple of weeks ago.

I smile and sigh,
keeping it to myself
once again-
a woman's heart
is a deep well.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you John & Kristin for your comments.

Kristin, your poem is just beautiful.

firmly rooted
where the winds don't blow -
a mother's heart

Alan Summers said...

Wow, what a delight, two extra poems in the comments section. ;-)

Kristin, your tanka is great!

all my best,
Alan
With Words
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