Thursday, 24 September 2009

like the ocean
there are depths
in my heart
that will remain
forever unknown

Modern English Tanka V3 No3 Spring 2009


John McDonald said...

another goodie paul

Kristin Riggs said...

This is fantastic. I wrote one with a very similar theme a couple of weeks ago.

I smile and sigh,
keeping it to myself
once again-
a woman's heart
is a deep well.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you John & Kristin for your comments.

Kristin, your poem is just beautiful.

firmly rooted
where the winds don't blow -
a mother's heart

Alan Summers said...

Wow, what a delight, two extra poems in the comments section. ;-)

Kristin, your tanka is great!

all my best,
With Words