Friday, 25 September 2009

I see myself
in the shape of a leaf...
falling

10 comments:

Frank Williams said...

I love this type of haiku Paul - so much said in three lines...

Paul Smith said...

Me too Frank... Thanks for commenting.

Laure said...

thank you for sharing your vision, Paul. Really lovely.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Laure, thank you for this.

Kristin Riggs said...

Oh!!! I feel like this sometimes. Brilliantly said!

Maxine said...

I've always been against short form poems, but slowly some of them are changing my mind. This is one.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Kristin I'm touched that this spoke to you.

Hi Maxine, I'm really glad that you dropped by and am grateful for your honesty. You are welcome here any time.

Alan Summers said...

Again, Paul is one of those poets who show that haiku and other short poems have more than a credible place in the world of poetry.

all my best,
Alan
With Words
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mattm said...

I'm in full agreement with all of the above!

Matt

Paul Smith said...

Cheers Alan, Matt.